EXT. MUSTANG PRACTICE FEILD- DAY
Pual (18 years old) - runs towards the sidelines.
COACH BENNETT
Pual come here I want to talk to you. Go down to Doc’s he needs to see you.
Taking off his football helmet.
PUAL
Yes sir.
Runs out the stadium.
COACH BENNETT
It’s a damn shame. Could have started next year.
ASSISTANT COACH
I new it wasn't natural to gain 50 pounds in less than a year.
INT. MUSTANG TRAINER’S FACILITY- DAY
Pual walks in and Doc the head trainer motions for him.
DOC
Hey Pual step in my office. Close the door and have a seat.
PAUL
What’s up Doc?
Doc scratches his head.
DOC
Pual your urine tested positive for anabolic steroids. We are going to have to suspend your scholarship.
PUAL
Does this mean I’m getting kicked off the team.
DOC
The N. C. Double A is pretty specific about this.
DOC
Why did you do it.
Coach sidney walks by the Doc’s office.
PAUL
I just wanted to start.
DOC
You know that it was wrong. If your still on them Pual get off. I’m going to recommend a school psychologist for you to see.
PUAL
Your kidding me. I was fucking told to take them by the fucking coaches.
Coach sidney stares at Pual.
DOC
Which coaches?
Pual watches coach Sidney outside the office window.
DOC
Would you like to file a report of misconduct on the coaching staff.
Coach Sidney walks by Doc’s office.
PUAL
Nothing I say will change my situation here.
DOC
I’m sorry Pual but, you made the decision. Maybe if you bring out some names the board will give your scholarship another review. Don’t clean out your locker. We have to take off the team.
EXT. MUSTANG TRAINER’S FACILITY- DAY
Pual walks by the weight room and stops.
COACH SIDNEY
I hope you did’nt try and spread any lies.
PUAL
Why did you tell me to use it if you new it would still be in my system.
COACH SIDNEY
It’s the only way you would get to play. If it wasnt for me you’d just been a number on the sideline.
PUAL
A number and in four years a college degree.
PUAL
You screwed me.
Pual swings. He ducks then counters.
COACH SIDNEY
Don’t blame this on me I just gave you the man I didn't put the needle in your ass.
Pual’s on the floor nose bleeding.
COACH SIDNEY
Keep my name out your mouth or I’ll fucking kill your ass.
EXT. LOCKER FACILITY- DAY
Pual’s walking out of the gym as team practice lets out.
CHANCE
Yo! Pual!
Chance throws his pads down noticing Pual’s bloody nose.
CHANCE
What happened man.
Pual walks away.
CHANCE
Where are you going bro?
INT. COACHES LOCKER ROOM- DAY
PAUL
Sidney! You fucking peice of shit! You told me to take them you said they would be out of my system in a month.
COACH BENNETT
Is this true.
PUAL
Every bit of it.
COACH SIDNEY
Come on Pual. Don’t do this here.
PUAL
You lied to me and I fucking trusted you.
COACH SIDNEY
You wanted the spot you knew what you had to do.
COACH BENNETT
Sidney get out of this office. Get out!
COACH SIDNEY
Shut up old man! You aint a coach and this aint a team. Fucking disgrace. You aint won two games in two years. It’s a waste of my time.
Sidney heads out the doors.
COACH SIDNEY (O.S.)
Hey Pual, don’t think I won’t get mine you little son of a bitch!
Coach Bennet picks up the phone.
COACH BENNETT
Get security. Don’t come back. Pual Get gone too.
Pual puts his hand on his head.
EXT. BABY DOLLS- NIGHT
Text: Two months later.
Pual (21 years old) - Looking “jacked as hell” stands as the door man door man.
MURPHY
Jesus Boy you look like you done turn into a man in six weeks.
PAUL
What do you mean?
MURPHY
Meaning you where big as hell when you took this job but now your like three of me.
PAUL
Are you jealous?
MURPHY
A little.
MURPHY
Don said you had to kick out some spicks the other night.
PAUL
So they wanted the girls to fart in their face? That’s pretty fucking sick.
MURPHY
Only a Mexican: Bean hole, burrito nibbling, cucaracha chasing spick bastards in the park sniffing old ladies’ bicycle seats like a couple of monkeys. They get off on the smell of shit, you know it’s like a drug to them to keep their ass leaking chorizo all day smelling like a slut. That’s why they always eat beans and jalapeños in every dish cuz the love to smell their shit like slut monkeys.
PUAL
Your one racist mother fucker. Sounds like you a personal vendetta with hispanics.
MURPHY
I used to be married to one. She cheated on me every night. I always came home to a loose leaking worn out whore vagina. She was so tired of getting plantanes shoved up her ass all day that my true loving cock didn't matter. I know I should just get over it.
PUAL
Jesus Christ Murphy come on. Haven't you ever heard of grieving in silence?
MURPHY
Fuck you, I’m not even joking.
PUAL
Did I mention your also disgusting to look at.
MURPHY
When you were born the doctor thought you were a peice of shit and tried to shove back up your mothers ass.
PAUL
Your disgusting.
Luaghs.
Murphy (46 years old) - man with a cist on his face, watermelon sized stomach and lazy eye.
PAUL
Sometimes I think this is the trashiest strip club in Dallas.
MURPHY
It is. Them Mexicans said they’d be back they were coming back to kill me.
Murphy Laughs.
MURPHY
That’s why I keep a 44 mag in my glove box.
The club’s front door is thrown open.
AUSTRSALIAN
Yeah fuck you man you girl owes me sixty dollars.
Don pushes the Austrailian out the club.
DON
You gave her the money she said she you dance. Whatever you lost consider it her tip for puting up with you drunk ass now you kicked out go home please
AUSTRSALIAN
You know what fuck you we are gone.
He turns to walk away.
PAUL
Watchout!
sucker punch.
PAUL
Shit
Pual jumps to put the Australian in a head lock.
BOUNCER
Mother Fucker!
Bouncer stumbles and sprays mace on the Australian.
PAUL
I can’t see.
BOUNCER
Don’t let go Pual! Cops are on the way. For god’s sake Murphy put the gun away the cops are coming.
MURPHY
Where did that other Aussi go.
The police cars pull up.
POLICE OFFICER
Let go of him now.
Loosens his grip.
POLICE OFFICER
Before you pop his head like a pimple.
INT. BABY DOLLS- NIGHT
Music booms Pual walks straight to the back.
INT. BABY DOLLS MEN’S REST ROOM- NIGHT
Paul is splashing his face with cold water.
PAUL
Fuck!
A Stefani, a stripper, walks in.
STEFANI
Are you alright.
She walks up to him.
PAUL
I’m fine.
STEFANI
Luke warm trust me it will help.
PUAL
Are my eyes red.
Stops washing and looks at her.
STEFANI
Your face is too.
PAUL
Fuck this place. I’ve been here for two months and I’ve seen the trashiest people in Dallas.
She looks down.
PUAL
I’m not talking about you. I know your just trying to pay the bills.
She starts to cry.
STEFANI
No your right I am trash and if it wasn't for me you wouldn't have gotten maced.
PAUL
It’s not your fault.
STEFANI
The guy gave me sixty dollars but he kept wanting to put his fingers in me. I had him kicked out.
She hugs him.
STEFANI
I’m sorry.
PUAL
There has got to be a better way to pay for college than this.
STEFANI
Don’t quit. Your the only thing I like about this place.
Another striper stumbles in with another man.
INT. BABY DOLLS- NIGHT
Pual walks through the night club and out the door.
MURPHY
You alright? Pual?
PUAL
Yeah I’m heading home for the night.
MURPHY
What do you want me to tell nick?
PUAL
Tell him I quit.
INT. PUAL’S APARTMENT- MORNING
Pual sits watching the television cans of beer at his feet.
CHANCE
Damn dude did you get any sleep.
Looks at Chance.
CHANCE
Damn dud your face is red.
PAUL
Let’s just say I quit the strip club job.
CHANCE
Good for you. I take it you where in some kind of scuffle.
PAUL
I got maced and kicked in the face for helping out another bouncer. It’s like those guys just start shit in the club then bring out for me to handle. It’s not worth minimum wage.
CHANCE
I think I may have a job for you.
PUAL
At this point I’m ready to serve someone cheese fries or wash a bumber.
CHANCE
You don’t want to go back to that. Making minimum wage your not going to like that.
PAUL
What job do you have in mind? Better yet is it legal.
CHANCE
Technically yeah.
PUAL
What do you mean technically?
CHANCE
I think you should meet this guy before I say anything else.
PUAL
His isn't another one of tose guys who gives you the credit card and tells you to buy shit.
CHANCE
No dude that was illegal as hell. This is sorta different. I’m not going to say anything more. You just have to meet Adar.
PAUL
Who’s Adar.
CHANCE
He’s the guy who got me the job. If you haven't noticed he’s the one who got me the job.
PUAL
You have a job now.
CHANCE
No more relying on loans. I get paid 500 a night. At least. That’s for like an hour of work at the most.
PAUL
Now I’m intrigued.
CHANCE
Alright I’ll tell you this... All you have to do is drive around a couple of cute girls from 10 to 4 in the morning. Sometimes the nights turn into mornings.
PAUL
Your shitting me. Your an escort driver.
Chance grins.
CHANCE
I’m just trying to help out a former teammate. This operation can put some real cash in your pockets.
PUAL
Now I’m thinking about it.
CHANCE
I’ll talk to Adar tonight and see if can get you in.
Chance tosses him a beer.
CHANCE
Relax. Your not going to have to drop out of school.
PUAL
You want a shot?
CHANCE
Of what?
PAUL
Does it matter.
CHANCE
I’m game.
PUAL
To quiting my job.. How will I survive this?
CHANCE
You’ll get another one. One that pays off.
Chance downs the shot and looks at his watch.
CHANCE
Well, I got class. I’ll see you this evening try and get some rest.
He walks out Pual falls down on the couch.
INT. PUAL’S ROOM- DAY
Pual is on his phone.
PUAL
Yeah mom is Dad there? No everythings fine I just had something kind of important to tell you guys. Hey dad. No everything’s fine. How’s the team. Well, that’s what I wanted to talk to you about. They kicked me off the team. It was for steroids.
The sound on the other line clicks off.
PAUL
Fuck.
Pual hangs up the phone.
INT. LOCKER FACILITY- DAY
COACH SIDNEY
Sometimes the weight gainers and supplements arent enough you need another boost.
Pual looks at his team mate and coach Sidney.
COACH SIDNEY
Your not scared of needles are you.
Series of needles run in and out flesh.
INT. PUAL’S APARTMENT- NIGHT
Pual’s door bell rings and he wakes up on the couch.
PUAL
Hold up a minute.
He opens the door.
PUAL
Stephani hey.
STEFANI
I had a feeling you would miss your classes today.
STEFANI
Your face looks better.
PAUL
Thanks.
STEFANI
Have any plans tonight?
PUAL
I’m feeling a little hung over.
STEFANI
You know there is only one way to cure a hang over.
PUAL
Chinese take out and a movie.
STEFANI
I was going to say hair of the dog that bit you.
INT. NIGHT CLUB- NIGHT
Stefani leads Pual in the club.
STEFANI
Here take this use it to buy drinks.
She hands him a roll of bills.
STEFANI
I’s the least I could do after getting you pepper sprayed.
PAUL
Alright lets take some shots.
The two are slamming back shots.
COACH SIDNEY
Look what we have here. Pual Hey buddy.
STEFANI
Pual who’s that? Those guys are pointing at you.
PAUL
It’s an old coach.
Coach Sidney and a couple of players walk up to Pual.
COACH SIDNEY
Pual. How have you been?
PUAL
Without a job and scholarship but ofcuourse you already know all about that.
COACH SIDNEY
Listen I wanted to tell you that I know your still good on that four hundred you still owe me for the anavar and the valuims I told you could keep.
The coach moves towards Stefani.
COACH SIDNEY
Don’t forget to tell your folks I said hi. Hey baby Don’t let his razor fool you. He shaved his head cuz the juice made his hair fall out.
Pual Sends a knock out punch to Sidneys face.
PLAYER
You just fucked up.
About four players jump on Pual punching him.
PUAL
Tell them to get off me!
He has a player in a head lock.
PLAYER
Get off him!
They crawl away from Pual.
PUAL
Close my tab out. I’ll call you later.
Stefani walks up to the bar.
STEFANI
I’d like to close my tab.
BARTENDER
What’s the name?
STEFANI
Pual Townsend.
INT. PUAL’S APARTMENT- NIGHT
Chance and two other guys are playing video games.
PUAL
Sup.
Pual head straight to the bathroom.
CHANCE
Whoa, what the fuck happened to you man.
Pual bleeding at the nose.
PUAL
I got jumped by Coach Sidney.
CHANCE
Coach jumped you?
PUAL
Yeah, with about three or four other line backers.
JASON
Holy shit man take a bong rip.
Jason (twenty two years old) - hands Pual a bong.
PUAL
Thanks.
Lights the bong.
JASON
I still have some of the pills.
PUAL
Yeah give me a couple of those.
CHANCE
They put a couple of knots on your noggin.
PUAL
You should see his face. About four or five of them jumped me. I made the one on the bottom squeal till his friends climbed off me.
CHANCE
Would you reconize these guys. You want to go back up there Ill bring my 45 and we’ll scare the shit out of those pussies.
PUAL
The place is swarming with cops now.
JASON
Your lucky you did’nt get a bottle to the head or a shank to the gut.
Stefani walks in the front door.
STEFANI
They tried to charge you for some broken lawn chairs.
PUAL
Fuck those assholes you got my card?
She hands him his card.
JASON
So did your man get his ass whooped?
STEFANI
He kicked their asses! Your getting laid tonight.
She kisses his face.
CHANCE
Hey you know that job I was telling you about. He wants to meet you tomarrow.
STEFANI
Your quitting the club? Where are going?
PUAL
It’s just some thing in advertising.
STEFANI
Advertising yay! That sounds cool. You needed to get out of that shit hole.
PUAL
Well, If I was getting tips like you it may be worth it.
She laughs.
STEFANI
Yeah well I have made shit the past couple of weeks that place is going down hill. Only cheap spicks and niggers hang there anymore.
CHANCE
Well Stefani maybe I can talk to my boss and get you an interview too.
STEFANI
You’d do that?
CHANCE
Yeah it no biggie.
Pual looks at Chance and shakes his head.
STEFANI
That would be so cool if we could work together.
PUAL
Alright guys well I’m going to bed.
CHANCE
Well get some rest we’ll talk more tomorrow.
INT. PUAL’S APARTMENT- MORNING
Stefani is under the sheets.
PUAL
Hand me that bottle of Valuim.
Pual has a ice pack on his head.
STEFANI
I’m about to head to the club and make my sixty dollars.
PUAL
Alright bye babe.
She throws a shirt on over her g string.
STEFANI
Good luck on your advertising interview.
PUAL
Thanks babe.
Stefani walks out the apartment.
CHANCE.
Well good morning killer. You get some good hero sex last night?
Pual walks into the kitchen.
PAUL
Yeah it was nice.
CHANCE
I would have paid to see that fight. It sure impressed the hell out of stefani she was ready to rape you when she came over her last night. I wasnt listening but it sounded like yall fucked for four hours.
PUAL
Sounds like you were listening. Why did you tell her about the job?
CHANCE
Hey, Relax. She’s a stripper. Being an escort like a major promotion for her. Especially considering that slut barn she’s currently employed to.
PAUL
I just don’t want to tell her yet.
CHANCE
So your going to tell her your working nights for a advertising company.
PAUL
Yeah, I didn't want to tell her yet.
CHANCE
I won’t mention it again. Back to reality what the fuck else are you going to do for employment.
PAUL
I’m going to look around.
CHANCE
While your trying to get a job waiting tables I’m going to go ahead and talk to Adar for you.
Hands him a hundred dollar bill.
CHANCE
Here take this I know your broke right now. Listen, I’m not going to watch you starve. I’m your friend.
PAUL
Thanks.
CHANCE
Don’t sweat it, I’m off to pick up these chicks and let them close the deal on a couple of out of towner’s at the Hilton.
Door bell rings.
CHANCE
Who is it?
Pual looks through the peep hole.
PUAL
I got it.
Murphy is standing outside.
MURPHY
Dude I got so much extra blow. I need you as a friend I’m begging you help me finish this bag.
PUAL
God damn Murphy you are fucked up.
MURPHY
You got to let me in man I haven't slept and I’m not going to until you help me finish this shit.
PAUL
Alright come in.
MURPHY
You got anything to drink?
PUAL
There is some Makers by the sink. You’l have to drink it straight. There’s no mixers.
MURPHY
I don’t give a shit I just need some liqueur in my blood before my jaw starts grinding.
Chance walks out of his room.
CHANCE
Hey.
PUAL
Chance this is Murphy. I used to work with him at Baby Dolls.
CHANCE
Your the guy with the 45 in his truck.
MURPHY
Yeah but I always work with snub on my ankle just in case.
Murphy pulls his pants leg up exposing a revolver.
CHANCE
You where that in church?
Pual does a line then passes the bag to Murphy.
MURPHY
I sleep with it under my pillow.
Murphy smiles.
CHANCE
Pual I’m out. Have fun driving around dumb whores from sun up to sun down.
MURPHY
Hey that sounds like fun.
CHANCE
Some of those dumb whores make more than a grand a night. It’s not as hard as bussing tables at chili’s working with high school kids scraping for dollar tips. Maybe tonight I’ll make over three hundred. I’m hoping to at least make over two bills. For driving a car with a couple girls in the back seat I might let suck my cock.
Murphy takes another sniff from a key in his hand.
MURPHY
That sounds like fucking paradise.
CHANCE
Enjoy your coke party I’m out.
PUAL
Later.
MURPHY
Dude you really should’nt have quit.
MURPHY
They guys like you man. You really beat the shit out of that fucking Austalian prick.
PUAL
I just put him in a head lock.
MURPHY
You did’nt punch him? Damn. Well you sure had his head squeezed up in your arm pit like you were about to bust a giant zit.
PUAL
The cop said that.
MURPHY
What? Oh yeah he haha that’s funny. Murphy lets just finish the rest.
Murphy puts the bag inhis mouth and chews it.
MURPHY
I’m good are you good.
PUAL
Yeah I’m good.
MURPHY
Seriously I thought you were going to break open his scalp. The guys were impressed as shit how you handled that.
PUAL
I’m not impressed with getting pepper sprayed and kicked in the fucking face.
MURPHY
Doug was so rocked from getting sucker punched. He sprayed my leg as well. I’m telling you it was him that kicked your face I just the guys balls.
PUAL
Either way he defiantly got his. I’m glad I don’t work there anymore. If I was taking that risk for just five dollars more an hour I would stress it more but at min wage I thought I would see more pussies than fights.
Murphy stands up.
MURPHY
Well I’m treating you tonight. We are going to Baby Dolls and you are getting al the lap dances you want curtesy of me and Doug. Doug owes you for kicking your face and the whole mace shit.
PUAL
Why would I go to a shit club like that when I have the finest stripper coming home to me?
Murphy empties the booze.
MURPHY
Is there any more booze.
Murphy pulls out his keys.
MURPHY
Booze run.
INT. MURPHY’S CAR- NIGHT
Murphy lights a cig and hands one to Pual.
PUAL
I don’t smoked.
MURPHY
Normally I don’t but when I’m yacked out they are like candy canes to my lungs. Where are we hitting up? You want to go to the Beer Barn?
PUAL
I don’t give a fuck.
EXT. BEER BARN- NIGHT
Car turns into Beer Barn.
MURPHY
Cheapest beer in Dallas.
INT. BEER BARN- NIGHT
Murphy opens fringe full of beers.
MURPHY
You can get what you want. I’m getting a thirty pack of Busch. You can get what you want.
ROBBER
Gimme your money!!
Man with a mask is pointing a gun at the clerk.
MURPHY
Shhh.
Murphy finger over his lips points down. They lower.
MURPHY
Stay here.
PUAL
Murphy please.
MURPHY
Shhh.
ROBBER
Just give me the fucking cash!
MURPHY
Hey!
One shot to the head. Robber drops limp. Leg twitches.
MURPHY
Right in the eye.
Murphy drops cash on the counter and walks to the door.
MURPHY
I got the beer boy lets go.
PUAL
What the fuck.
MURPHY
Thank me later son. My buddy and I have to party tonight. No time to answer questions. Lets go.
CLERK
Hey!
Pual walks to the door with the beer.
CLERK
Nice shot.
INT. MURPHY’S CAR- NIGHT
PUAL
Holy shit man! What the fuck was that?
MURPHY
It was self defense and did’nt have time to fool with police.
PUAL
They had fucking cameras in the store.
Murphy opens a beer.
MURPHY
I had on my hat. I’ll just not go to Beer Barn anymore.
PUAL
What? What about me? I did’nt have a hat on.
MURPHY
Relax have a beer.
PUAL
I knew you where fucked up but, come on you just killed a man.
MURPHY
Chill Pual. I would never hurt a friend. You know that. That mother fucker was asking for it waving that gun around threating everyones life in that fucking store.
PUAL
I mean damn that was one hell of a shot.
MURPHY
It was wasn’t it. It was like the coke helped me. It point right on point. Your not going to say shit are you?
PUAL
No man don’t get paranoid.
MURPHY
I mean shit dude you can’t tell your roommates about this or nothing. It has to be our little secret.
PAUL
Relax it will.
MURPHY
Whoo! what a fucking rush.
Murphy opens his door.
MURPHY
We are here boy!
PUAL
I told you I did’nt want to go to a strip club but at this point I’m feeling like whatever.
MURPHY
I’m off. We will call Big Mike and get some more drugs boy.
Pual chugs his beer.
PAUL
That was a rush. I feel alive. Like shaken awake.
MURPHY
I told you! your getting ass in your face tonight!
Walking into the strip club.
INT. BABY DOLLS- NIGHT
Stefani looks at Pual as he walks by the stage.
MURPHY
There’s your lady.
She dances for another man but looks at Pual.
MURPHY
Lets get a table.
Murphy sits the case of beer on the table.
NICOLE
Hey guys my names nicole.
MURPHY
Relax sweet cheeks I work here we don’t need any ice. We are just going to watch the ladys and look for the ones we like.
She walks away.
MURPHY
Fucking new bitch. How come they alway hire the fucking ugly ones as the waitresses.
DJ
Alright guys give it up for Alexsus! Coming up on the stage next is Star. Star Ladies and Gentlemen get your bucks out and tip tip tip her.
Stefani walks up to Pual and sits on his lap.
STEFANI
Hey guys. How come your here tonight? Wow your pupils say it all.
MURPHY
Whats up honey you look hot tonight. How about a dance?
STEFANI
For you its double.
MURPHY
Come on I work here shouldn't I get half off.
STEFANI
Well your friend here has a line of credit that could last all night.
PAUL
I’m not here to distract you from your clientele.
STEFANI
Don’t worry I already made my money!
PUAL
Well can can we still chill.
STEPHANI
Your welcome, to pay for lap dances from any of these skanks.
MURPHY
Hey theses are not skanks.
PUAL
We are just going to be here for a minute. We really need to relax.
STEPHANI
You are so coked out. Have any more.
PUAL
Sorry.
Murphy had here a folded bill.
MURPHY
Here baby doll just keep that low key.
STEFANI
I will. I’m going to the ladies room.
She gets up and walks away.
PUAL
Come on she doesn't need that.
MURPHY
Don’t worry I got more.
PAUL
I thought you just had one bag.
MURPHY
Come on It’s me. I always get more than one.
PUAL
Oh shit!
MURPHY
What’s up.
Adar and Chance walk into the club with two girls.
PAUL
Nothing I just didn't want to run into them tonight.
Chance notices Pual and Murphy and throws up his hand.
CHANCE
Hey roomy! Did’nt expect to see you here tonight. I thought you quit.
PAUL
I did.
CHANCE
This is my roommate Pual.
Adar (24 years old) - with long thinning hair and a lisp.
ADAR
I’ve heard alot about you.
CHANCE
Forgive me for beign rude. Pual this is Adar.
ADAR
Damn Chance was right, you are one huge mother fucker.
CHANCE
And this is Ashley and Jessica.
MURPHY
Sup man my names Murphy.
He reaches to shake the girls hands.
ASHLEY
Hi.
Ashley (21 years old) - blonde with perfect figure and tan.
JESSICA
Hi.
Jessica (23 years old) - Burnett with tan a sexy tatoos.
MURPHY
Sup.
ADAR
Hey.
Adar slowly shakes hands with Murphy.
ADAR
Chance tells me your looking for a job.
Stephani walks out of the rest room.
PUAL
Well I wanted to talk to you about possibly driving for you.
ADAR
Business is bigger than it’s ever been. We could definitely use another driver. Who is this beauty?
STEFANI
My name is Stefani.
Jessica looks jealous.
ADAR
Hello my name is Adar.
STEFANI
Nice to meet you.
CHANCE
You already know me.
She kisses Chance on the cheek.
STEFANI
Hey Chance you look cute tonight.
CHANCE
Would Pual get pissed if I asked for a dance.
PUAL
Go ahead.
STEFANI
Maybe later I’m taking my break now.
Don (46 year old) - strip club manager pproaches.
DON
Stefani what the fuck are you doing sitting on that sweet little ass. Get up and make me some money.
PUAL
Whoa. Chill the fuck out Don. She’s on her break. Besides how much money has she already made this place?
DON
Not enough. It’s a shame you quit. I was thinking about giving you a raise. I see your hanging out with Murphy now. Guess he thinks you will help him get some pussy.
Murphy coked and furious.
PUAL
Why do you got to be a dick when I saved your ass?
DON
You didn't save my ass I was sucker punched then you put him in a head lock right before I maced him.
MURPHY
He knocked you out Don. I saw it with my own two eyes.
DON
Murphy watch your mouth. You look fucked up so I’ll let that slide. Maybe you guys would like to explain why you are up here you on your one night off and you too good to work here but, can come and steal my business. She’s not going to dance with another man when your in here that’s why I put you on the door.
STEFANI
You know what Don screw you I quit.
Pual casually stands up.
PUAL
See you Don. Adar we will do this another time. Later Murphy I’m riding home with Stefani.
Tips his hat to Adar.
ADAR
See you later Pual.
CHANCE
Wait up!
Chance runs to the door.
CHANCE
Wait!
Stephani keeps walking Pual stops.
CHANCE
Hey fuck this guy we can go to another club if you want.
PAUL
It’s cool. I really just want to be alone with Stefani. Do me a favor come home late tomarrow.
CHANCE
I got you bro. Later.
Turns and runs out to Stephani.
INT. STEFANI’S CAR- NIGHT
STEFANI
I’m tired of beign talked down to like that. Fuck this job. I’m better than this.
PAUL
I think that’s the smartest thing you’ve said since I’ve met you.
Passionately kisses him.
INT. PUAL’S APARTMENT- NIGHT
The two are intertwined in a sexual position the changes to the music.
STEFANI
I don’t want you to get upset when I say this but, I love you.
PUAL
Don’t say that.
STEFANI
Why not, it’s true.
PAUL
Love takes time.
PAUL
You don’t love me.
Sighs.
PUAL
Love takes time but, I will say I could see myself with you for a long time.
STEFANI
Your perfect.
PAUL
There is always room for perfection.
Mounts her lays his head on hers.
PAUL
Close your eyes
Rocks the bed.
INT. PUAL’S APARTMENT- MORNING
Hangs off the bed covers over his ass.
STEFANI
Hey sleepy head.
Peels back the covers to look at his ass.
PAUL
Hey.
STEFANI
You don’t have to wake up but, if you do I made breakfast in bed.
PUAL
Your starting to impress me.
Goes to mount him.
PUAL
We out of condoms.
STEFANI
Relax I’m on the pill.
PUAL
I don’t know if your child worthy.
STEFANI
You’ve got morning wood.
STEFANI
It feels so much better without a condom. Skin on skin.
He tries to pull her off but it is too good.
STEFANI
I love you it’s true.
PUAL
Oh God!
Orgasm.
PAUL
I could just melt in you.
She smiles and hands him food without leaving his hips.
INT. PUAL’S APARTMENT- DAY
Knock on the door.
CHANCE
Pual are you in there?
Pual wakes up. Looks to his side and sees a note.
PUAL
Yeah come in.
CHANCE
Last night was sick. Your boy Murphy is working for Adar now. Don’t worry he didn't get your job. He said the web site is booming and could use another driver if your still down.
PUAL
You haven't slept.
CHANCE
Correct.
PUAL
Get some rest.
CHANCE
No! I’ll tell you why Adar is throwing a party and your invited. Stephani too.
PUAL
Impress me?
Note reads: Going to look for a job that will impress you.
CHANCE
What?
PAUL
Nothing I was talking to myself.
CHANCE
Want a beer.
PUAL
No thanks I’m about to work out.
CHANCE
Tonight Adar’s house be there.
PUAL
Ok.
CHANCE
Whoo!
INT. GYM- DAY
Pual Watches his muscles work in the mirror. Phone rings.
PUAL
Yeah. Ma.
PUAL’S MOTHER
Your father wants to talk to you.
Pual catches his breath.
PUAL’S FATHER
Pual. Are you there?
PUAL
I’m here.
PUAL’S FATHER
Your mother wants you to come home. She thinks it will be best for you and I do think it as well. You gotta get off the drugs boy. That school is too expensive for you too keep taking loans out and we have decided that we are not going to help you anymore.
PAUL
I’m sorry that’s how you feel. I’m not coming home. I’ll find a job you don’t have to worry about me.
Hangs up the phone.
EXT. PENTHOUSE ROOF- NIGHT
CHANCE
Now this is an apartment.
PUAL
It’s nice.
Adar approaches with a woman on each arm.
ADAR
Pual glad you could make it.
Adar has on designer shades.
PUAL
I like your place.
ADAR
I’m sorry how rude of me. This is Crystal and Emily.
PUAL
Hey.
EMILY
I like your muscles.
PAUL
Thanks.
ADAR
Ladies why don’t you show Pual around the place. I got to say hi to some old friends.
EMILY
Follow us.
CRYSTAL
Do you smoke?
PAUL
Only weed if the times right.
INT. PENT HOUSE KITCHEN- NIGHT
CRYSTAL
Well, they are rolling up some hash with dro joints I think you call them a snake in the grass. For liquid we have jars of grey goose that has been sitting with different fruits and berries. I would just grab the different fruit and mix them with juice. That has gotten me wasted. If your brave enough there is mushroom ice cream in the freezer.
EMILY
I made that.
She waves.
CRYSTAL
You look like you can handle it.
Emily opens the freezer.
EMILY
I’ll make you a bowl. Try a little bit. Jus a taste and tell me what you think.
Spoons some out and hands it to him.
PUAL
Tastes lovely.
MURPHY
Now this is what I call a party.
Murphy is dripping water on the kitchen floor.
MURPHY
Your having some ice cream too? I had four scoops.
PUAL
Maybe I’ll just have two.
MURPHY
No you gotta do two.
EMILY
He’s right.
Hands him the bowl.
PUAL
That’s alot of ice cream.
MURPHY
Your a big boy you can handle it. Bring up to the hot tub.
PUAL
There’s a hot tub?
MURPHY
Oh yeah.
Points up to a hot tub’s glass floor on the top floor.
PUAL
I didn’t bring my swim suit.
MURPHY
Adar’s got you. He has extras upstairs. It’s the highest place in the whole building.
CRYSTAL
The hot tub sounds like an excellent idea.
EMILY
It does doesn’t it.
CRYSTAL
Lets show him the upstairs.
MURPHY
I’ll lead the way.
INT. PENT HOUSE OBSERVATORY NIGHT
MURPHY
Go on girls get in.
EMILY
Ok.
Takes off her clothes and looks at Crystal.
EMILY
Don’t be a prude. Take off your clothes bitch!
MURPHY
I like the way she talks. Hey Pual I sure am glad I came over to your place that day. Seriously man. My life has drastically Improved and I owe you brother.
PUAL
Don’t mention it.
Murphy, Emily, Paul, and Crystal sit in the hot tub.
MURPHY
This feels like heaven bother. The only thing beter than this...
PUAL
Is sex
EMILY
An orgasm in the hot tub would be so hot.
MURPHY
Well I’m burning baby.
Adar steps in.
ADAR
Awesome you guys are having a good time.
MURPHY
Excellent. But I think when the sun aint up yet and you shoot that beautiful buck between the eyes and he just drops. Now that’s better than sex.
PUAL
I’m relaxed but, I can’t quite relate to that.
MURPHY
What do you mean. You never go hunting?
ADAR
Good lets talk. These girls who you have had the pleasure of knowing over the last hour both work for me and my father. If you work for me I guarantee you will be rewarded. This isn’t your normal nine to five. We work late nights. The men rent the girls for a certain amount of time. They always pay first. You drive her their wait for her to do her thing then drive home. It’s that simple. You can make good money doing this Pual trust me. You might get to know a few girls who knows?
PUAL
I’m down.
MURPHY
When do we start.
ADAR
Chance is taking you on a couple of training trips. I’ll take Pual with me. I’ll show the ropes and how its done a couple of times then you will start making your own money. Good money.
INT. PUAL’S APARTMENT- NIGHT
Pual turns on the lights.
STEFANI
Where have you been?
PUAL
How did you get in.
STEFANI
Come on I know where you hide your keys.
STEFANI
I found a job.
PUAL
So did I.
STEFANI
Really doing what?
PAUL
Security. I would be working maily nights.
STEFANI
I’ve decided not to strip. The tips aren't as big but, I won’t be taking my clothes off. I’m trying Pual. I don’t want you to think I am a typical stripper slut. I have goals and dreams. It’s just the money was so good. From now on I’m saling beer and sliders until I can do what I love.
PUAL
What do you love to do?
STEFANI
I love to paint. I used to paint for my mom. She was my biggest fan
PUAL
Don’t worry, you impress me.
STEFANI
Lay down with me.
Crawls into bed.
STEFANI
Tell me about your security job.
PAUL
It’s just a hotel.
STEFANI
In highland Park?
PUAL
Yeah.
Touches her ass.
STEFANI
Which one?
PUAL
Hilton.
STEFANI
Are you going to have to carry a gun?
PUAL
No. I don’t think so.
STEFANI
It’s like we are both turning over a new leaf. Getting a new job and starting a new life.
PUAL
Yeah. Your right.
Looks at her.
INT. ADAR’S CAR- NIGHT
ADAR
Ready to ride.
PUAL
Yeah. Where is the first drive.
ADAR
Shit no! Bro, we are going to the store to grab a bite to eat then we will pick up the girls at around ten and don’t worry about it your sandwich is on me.
Turns up the music and leans his seat back.
PUAL
Sounds good.
INT. GROCERY STORE- NIGHT
ADAR
You know what kind of sandwich I like? The biggest one I can find with the most flavor and the most meat. Meat is what matters. Fuck the rest of it. Here. A hero for a hero.
Hands Pual a sandwich.
PUAL
You want any chips.
ADAR
Now your thinking. How about BBQ.
PUAL
Alright.
ADAR
I’ll grab the chips and meet you in the check out line.
CASHIER
You look like Jimmy Ryan.
JIMMY RYAN
That’s because it is me.
CASHIER
No way your lying?
JIMMY RYAN
No it’s me.
CASHIER
No it’s not.
PUAL
It’s him. I recognize his face.
Jimmy Ryan takes his change and walks out.
ADAR
Holy shit was that Jimmy Ryan?
PUAL
Yeah.
ADAR
I heard he had a kid here in Dallas. Shit he’s the biggest country actor to come out of this town that’s for sure.
CASHIER
Twelve dollars.
ADAR
I got it.
Cashier leaves her register and runs out the door.
ADAR
Come on give me a break. What people will do for a glimpse of a star.
CASHIER
Wait! Jimmy Ryan!
PAUL
The power of money.
ADAR
You got it.
INT. ADADR’S CAR- NIGHT
ADAR
We are going to pick up our first girl of the night.
Turns the wheel.
ADAR
Perhaps you have noticed we have left the bubble of downtown Dallas. Guess you can tell where we are going?
PUAL
The ghetto.
ADAR
This is my favorite girl.
Adar pulls up to public housing apartment.
ADAR
Her name is Jupiter. That’s her ride.
PAUL
Nice.
ADAR
I was with her when she bought it.
Jupiter (17 years old) - black skin with a pink dress.
JUPITER
Well don’t just stand there boy open the door for me.
Adar laughs.
ADAR
She’s going to fuck with you man. That’s just her personality.
Pual steps out and opens Adar’s back seat car door.
JUPITER
Thank you.
ADAR
You look beautiful tonight.
JUPITER
Who’s the new guy?
PUAL
My name is Pual.
JUPITER
Your big. Are you going to keep me safe?
ADAR
I’m training Pual tonight and tomarow. I’m going to show him how to work like me.
JUPITER
Shut the fuck up you know I do all the then give yall a cut.
She smiles touching Pual’s shoulder.
JUPITER
Relax, just take care of me and you will get a big cut. Don’t let Adar fuck with you I decide how much to break you off with.
ADAR
What did we make the other night Jupe?
JUPITER
You made six hundred. I made twenty five or thirty five hundred.
PUAL
Damn that’s alot of money.
JUPITER
No shit Daddy? Where are we going tonight.
ADAR
We had a call from a Guy in room one twenty five at the Double Tree down town.
JUPITER
How many hours.
ADAR
He paid for two.
JUPITER
I’ll charge him five hundred and hour, depending on how ugly he is. I might charge him more.
ADAR
That’s my girl.
JUPITER
You did tell the new guy not to say shit to any one about this.
PUAL
That’s a given right.
JUPITER
Part of the tip is that you tell no one about what we do.
ADAR
Jupiter stop getting stoned right before I pick you up. Your starting to get paranoid. Pual is cool. He can be trusted.
Jupiter lean into his ear.
JUPITER
Cuz, if you don’t I’ll rip off your balls boy.
Pual laughs. They all do.
EXT. DOUBLE TREE HOTEL- NIGHT
Turns down the music.
ADAR
Alright Pual we are not even going to look at the guy at the front desk. We are just going to walk straight to the elevator as if we have rented out the entire top floor.
Takes out white walkie talkies.
PUAL
I got it.
Adar looks at the lights on both.
ADAR
Fully charged.
Hands Jupiter one.
ADAR
I found out that the baby monitor was the most sensitive to sound. She keeps that one in her purse and I keep this one on me.
ADAR
Here put on this hat. It makes you look diviner.
Pual slips on the Fedora.
ADAR
Ready
Slips the monitor in his jacket.
ADAR
Let’s go listen to this dude get laid.
Chirps his car alarm
INT. DOUBLE TREE HOTEL- NIGHT
They walk past front desk straight to elevator.
JUPITER
We can go and get some drinks after this.
ADAR
We can grab a few before the next run.
JUPITER
I would really like you if we do.
Elevator dings. They go up.
INT. ELEVATOR- NIGHT
JUPITER
You do know I’m not having sex with him?
Looking at Pual.
JUPITER
I just dance.
ADAR
Ok.
JUPITER
Seriously.
DING!
INT. HOTEL HALLWAY- NIGHT
Turning the corner.
ADAR
We are going to just lay back here and listen.
JUPITER
What’s the room number again.
ADAR
One twenty five B.
She continues to walk to the door.
ADAR
Lets hang here.
Adjust the volume on the monitor. Turns it down.
INT. ROOM 125B- NIGHT
A handsome Arabic man opens the door.
JUPITER
Hey cutie. I’m Jupiter. Can I come in.
He is clean cut and wearing khakis with collar shirt.
JUPITER
Ok. So you already know it’s going to be eight hundred up front.
Points to the bed where there is a mound of cash.
JUPITER
Damn! How much is this.
MUHAMMAD
Forty two thousand dollars.
JUPITER
Are you sure you don’t want to have two more girls come over.
MUHAMMAD
No. Just you.
She walks to the bed and starts counting the cash.
JUPITER
What’s your name honey?
MUHAMMAD
Muhammad.
JUPITER
Well Muhammad do you get high.
She takes a vile of coke out of her purse.
JUPITER
Cuz, I do.
Pours some on her hand and snorts.
JUPITER
It makes sex feel real good. It makes your orgasm sound so much better.
Approaches her.
MUHAMMAD
If you say it does.
Her eyes widen.
JUPITER
Damn your big.
MUHAMMAD
I thought you black girls are used to big dicks.
Kisses her lips.
JUPITER
I love a fat cock.
MUHAMMAD
Lay down on the bed.
She jumps on top of the cash.
JUPITER
Lets have sex on this pile of money. It will be so hot.
Pulls out a pair of hand cuffs.
MUHAMMAD
It’s for role play.
Stuffs hundred dollar bills in her purse.
JUPITER
We just going to do all sorts of freaky shit tonight boy.
MUHAMMAD
Freak shit.
Throws pures to the floor.
MUHAMMAD
Fuck me.
Cuffs her to the bed post.
MUHAMMAD
Fuck! Me! you American black bitch.
Starts to have sex.
JUPITER
Oh yeah!
He stuffs a sock in her mouth and holds her head down.
JUPITER
No!.
Muffled scream.
MUHAMMAD
Your are going to learn your fucking place now bitch. You will where the burka before I cut off your head.
INT. HOTEL HALLWAY- NIGHT
Adar leans his ear in on the monitor.
ADAR
It’s going to be a great night.
Sounds of sex echo off the monitor.
PUAL
How long have you been driving her.
ADAR
Jupiter. I’ve been driving her for about two years now. She is a real pro. KNows how to get in and get out. This shouldn't take to long.
PUAL
That guy has a weird accent.
ADAR
It sounds middle eastern.
INT. ROOM 125B- NIGHT
Pulls knife to her throat.
MUHAMMAD
Shhh.
Takes the baby monitor and stuffs it under the matress.
MUHAMMAD
Now I am going to cut open your throat
Puts Hijab on her head.
MUHAMMAD
Lets turn you over on your stomach so you can say hello to your daddy.
Pulls out hidden camera.
MUHAMMAD
I love you tube celebrities you think you will be one. I think you will.
INT. HOTEL HALLWAY- NIGHT
PUAL
Something’s up with the sound.
ADAR
She probably just kicked her purse over. She does that shit and I go banging on the door when everything is alright.
INT. ROOM 125B- NIGHT
Muhammad positions the camera.
MUHAMMAD
All you American women are so concerned with money.
MUHAMMAD
That’s why you are all filthy trash. You do not think of your after life until the blade cuts your face.
MUHAMMAD
Ala has asked me not to show mercy on you.
Cuts her face.
MUHAMMAD
You will have the flag of the holy land cover your slut skin.
Pulls out Jihad flag.
INT. HOTEL HALLWAY- NIGHT
Adar looks at his watch and listens to the monitor.
ADAR
This is weird. Usually she is out by now. Like ten fifteen minutes tops.
Pual grabs the monitor.
PAUL
I don’t here anything.
ADAR
Yeah. Just press that button.
PUAL
Jupiter are you ok?..
Static.
PUAL
Something’s gone wrong in there. I feel it in my gut.
ADAR
Go knock on the door.
At the door.
PAUL
Everything alright in there.
Pual knocks.
ADAR
Jupiter you alright.
PUAL
Are you strapped.
ADAR
No man I don’t carry a gun.
PAUL
Just get my back I’m going to kick the door in.
Kicks door. Kicks door again.
MUHAMMAD
Ala! Jihad!
Door swings open.
MUHAMMAD
American pig.
Pual front rolls.
ADAR
Holy shit!
Muhammad is holding Jupiter’s head.
PUAL
Fuck.
Swings knife.
PUAL
Not tonight.
Grabs Muhammads wrist and Judo flips him.
MUHAMMAD
Ala!
Takes knife and shoves it into the floor through the neck.
ADAR
Holy fuck man how did you do that?
PAUL
Call 911!
ADAR
Fuck that we got to get out of her. You just killed the guy. I’m not going to be questioned. You don’t want to be either. Trust me.
PAUL
There is a camera.
ADAR
Holy shit well, just grab the fucking camera and get out of her.
Pual takes the camera.
ADAR
Follow me. We will take the stairs to the back exit.
INT. DOUBLE TREE HOTEL- NIGHT
Adar swings open the back door and Pual follows him.
INT. ADAR’S CAR- NIGHT
ADAR
God Damn man! This is not good. Shit!
Pual is playing back the camera.
PUAL
It was under the bed.
ADAR
What?
PUAL
The baby monitor.
ADAR
We will look at the tape later but, for now we are headed to a safe place.
PUAL
Where is that?
ADAR
My mom’s. Pual you are about to be entering a very wealthy circle of trust. I’m going to make you my personal fucking bodyguard.
INT. ADAR’S CAR- NIGHT
Adar puts out his smoke.
ADAR
This is the one.
PUAL
What’s the name of this place
ADAR
It has no name. They are just some office buildings my family is renting out. It’s where we run the calls and emails out of.
Adar makes a turn.
EXT. ADAR’S SAFE PLACE- NIGHT
Garage door opens.
INT. ADAR’S CAR- NIGHT
ADAR
I’m leaving the wheels in here just incase someone watched us drive away. I’m call some guys and have them switch the paint and plates. I feel stupid for saying this but you understand that when this gets out. You don’t know dick about it. It will blow over believe me you don’t want to be trying to even help the police on this or you will be seen as the perp with or without that video tape. Are we understood?
PUAL
Understood. Yeah we are understood.
ADAR
I can’t wait to show Mom’s that video tape. I would ask if you needed us to call a doctor but, you don’t even look like the guy scratched you.
PUAL
He did’nt.
ADAR
Where did you learn to do that. How did you get those fucking moves.
PUAL
I took Nikke Jujistu after getting kicked out of football. I had to fill my schedule with an physcial education class.
ADAR
You learned how to do that after taking a class for a half a year.
INT. ADAR’S SAFE PLACE- NIGHT
Mom (Forty seven years old) - tan fake breast and lips.
MOM
Adar what’s wrong?
ADAR
All I can say is watch the tape.
MOM
Hi they call me mom you must be Pual.
PAUL
Nice to meet you.
They shake hands.
ADAR
Watch this. The guy had a knife and Pual takes him out. He fucking stabs him through the neck.
MOM
I don’t want to see anymore.
ADAR
Watch how he takes this guy out.
MOM
You couldn't be any sadder about could you. because of you Jupiter is dead. Your weren't listen good enough.
ADAR
I’m sorry. If it was’nt for Pual I’d be dead.
MOM
Pual how can I thank you.
PUAL
You don’t need to think me.
MOM
Regardless I have them wire a hundred thousand dollars to your bank account immeaditatle. It will be in your account by the time you wake up.
ADAR
I told you brother your in the circle of trust now. You in the family.
MOM
Adar grab the champagne bottle.
Adar pops the cork and hands the two a glass.
MOM
Now remember honey you mus’nt tell even your closest friends about tonight. It’s going to be your biggest secret. If you you will stick around we will pay you for it. Not just for the secret but for your love and trust. Besides you and Adar seem to be friends and I can assure you when it comes to his father Adar’s friends are very well liked. Your college will be paid for and that’s just a gift from your new family.
ADAR
Cheers to a prosperous future.
MOM
Cheers.
PUAL
I’d rather toast to hope.
ADAR
I’ll drink to that.
PUAL
So when am I going to get to go home?
MOM
Relax. Have a drink with us then I will have Adar take my car.
ADAR
From now on Mom I think that Pual should drive the Limo.
MOM
We can arrange that.
ADAR
You take the Limo you will make a thousand bucks a night cash. All you got to do is make a couple of stops a night with our highest payed girl and you will be set for a vacation in Bora Bora by the next three months. Does that sound nice?
PUAL
Alright. You got a deal.
MOM
God your such a huge man. How did you get so big?
PUAL
Alot of working out.
MOM
You ain’t lying. I really appreciate your hospitality. Believe me I’m not going to say shit to anyone about tonight. You guys can keep the tape I just want to go home and sleep.
MOM
Okay. Adar grab my keys sitting on the table. Pual at least Take a bottle of Don with you. My treat.
PUAL
Ok. I will.
MOM
Your cute and you can take out a guy with a knife. That’s useful.
PUAL
Well thanks again.
MOM
Mom. Call me Mom.
PUAL
Ok bye Mom.
MOM
Goodbye special.
She winks.
INT. MOM’S CAR- DAYBREAK
ADAR
You know mom really likes you.
PUAL
I can tell.
ADAR
I feel so fucking pumped from tonight. You can’t tell me you don’t feel like a God from killing that prick.
PUAL
No just relieved.
ADAR
Here rub your nose on that.
Pual dabs his finger in a bag.
PUAL
Pure.
ADAR
Meet me tomorrow ten P.M..
City lights in mirror.
ADAR
I love this song.
Turns up music.
INT. PUAL’S APARTMENT- MORNING
STEFANI
I thought you would be back sooner.
PUAL
Long first night.
STEFANI
Breakfast is in the kitchen. Here let me go heat it up.
PUAL
No don’t worry. I’m not hungry I just want to sleep.
Stefani touches his arm.
STEFANI
You have blood on your sleeve.
PUAL
My nose was bleeding for some reason earlier.
He spoons her.
STEFANI
I start my training at the burger joint tomorrow. I’ll try and pick you up some food.
PUAL
You don’t miss making all that money as a stripper.
STEFANI
Come on are you kidding? I’d much rather come home every night smelling like grease and sweat than apple pucker body lotion and horney dudes.
PUAL
I’m listening.
STEFANI
Well at least you don’t think I’m a slut.
PUAL
I never did.
STEFANI
Come on you musthave thought, stripper equals dumb whore.
PUAL
I try never to judge a book by it’s cover but, rather how good you give head.
STEFANI
You jerk.
PUAL
Hint. Hint.
She goes down on him.
PUAL
Sweet Jesus this feel so amazing.
She pops up.
STEFANI
Am I your only lady?
PUAL
Come on you know I’m Monogomas.
STEFANI
I just smelt some perfume on your clothes and thought.
PUAL
You think too much.
STEFANI
About you.
INT. PUAL’S APARTMENT- NIGHT
Pual’ cell phone rings
MURPHY O.S.
Dude this new driver job hasn't gotten me shit yet. Worked one night and made hundred dollars. Dude see if you can pick me up some more shifts. I can’t just work one night a week.
PUAL
I’ll see what I can do.
MURPHY
I know you will. You are a good friend brother. Say what are you doing tomarrow morning say around daybreak.
PUAL
Hopeflly getting some sleep.
MURPHY
Well’ if you want to shoot a buck call me in time. It’s hunting season.
PUAL
I’m not much for waking up.
MURPHY
Well that meat sure tastes good I’ll try and save you some.
PUAL
Sounds good.
MURPHY
Don’t forget.
PAUL
I’ll talk to him.
MURPHY
Great see you later.
PUAL
Bye.
Knock on Pual’s door.
PUAL
Who is it.
CHANCE O.S.
Your roomate.
PUAL
What’s up.
CHANCE
Dude your boy Murphy started acting like a real sleeze ball around the girls. Adar was only withus for an hour but what he saw he did’nt like.
PUAL
Murphy is a cool guy he just likes to joke around.
CHANCE
Yo well his jokes are fucking upapropriate. I mean bitting fart bubbles in the bath tub and sniffing old ladies bycle seats. Were does he come up with this shit.
PUAL
It’s just old man humor.
CHANCE
Dude he was going to take a shit in a waffle cone and tell the yogurt store he wanted his money back.
PAUL
That’s funny what’s wrong.
CHANCE
No. It was kinda crude.
He sips a beer.
CHANCE
Adar said he’s toast. What’s this? A bottle of Don.
PUAL
Let’s just say it was a wild night. Take it easy on Murphy he’s a little odd but honest and helpful.
CHANCE
He’s your boy.
He spits.
PUAL
Come oon don’t spit on my floor.
CHANCE
It was’nt you floor. It was in the hallway.
PAUL
It’s the same thing we both live in this house.
CHANCE
Sorry bro.
Laughs.
PUAL
It’s okay just get to sleep.
CHANCE
How do you do it?
PUAL
Do What?
CHANCE
I’m popping this Don!
He grabs the bottle.
PUAL
Go ahead.
CHANCE
It’s like I read your mind. Or I mean you read my mind. Your Like a fucking zen master. You sleep on coke. I can’t do that.
PUAL
I do it for the Dreams.
CHANCE
You can dream. only person I know that sleeps with his door unlocked. Your like the most trusting person ever.
PUAL
Are you calling me gullible?
CHANCE
No. Not at all.
PUAL
Sounds like it, and in the jungle all you go by is sounds and rhythm.
CHANCE
That’s hard-core man. If I was in a war and I had to choose one person to be in my dug out, it would be you.
PUAL
Shut the fuck up.
CHANCE
No. Seriously dude. It would be you.
PUAL
Yeah they are lucid. They allow me to see the future. They let me do whatever I want really.
Pual curls up in his bed.
CHANCE
You know you are one fucked up kid.
PUAL
No. I’m one fucked up man.
CHANCE
Whatever you know what I mean.
PAUL
Do I?
CHANCE
You know it takes alot of balls to do what we do.
PUAL
What’s that?
CHANCE
Take out these these sluts.
PUAL
They just want to get money like me and you.
CHANCE
Come on Pual. It’s like you admire them.
PUAL
They want what you want.
CHANCE
I don’t take off my clothes and suck dick. They are just some sluts.
Chance chugs the bottle of Don.
PUAL
Consider that my gift and shut my door so I can sleep.
CHANCE
Ok!
Slams door.
INT. PUAL’S APARTMENT- MORNING
Pual gets up and drives out to a church.
PRIESTE
What are you here for son.
PUAL
To serve the lord.
PRIESTE
Then serve him. Four hundred and twenty thousand Hell Mary’s.
PUAL
Hell Mary! Hell mary!
Swings at figure in the dark.
PRIESTE
You ate an octopus son. If you don’t want to die. Let him come up.
PUAL
I’m trying.
He throws up an octopus.
PUAL
No.
It crawls around his neck.
PRIESTE
Pray with me.
PUAL
God!
PRIESTE
Beg the Lord.
PAUL
Let me breathe. God Please.
PREITE
Your dead!
INT. PUAL’S APARTMENT- DUSK
Pual wakes up in his bed.
PUAL
I’m awake.
Stands up in his bed.
PUAL
Oh shit.
His phone rings.
PUAL
Hey mom.
PUAL’S MOTHER
Pual how are you?
PUAL
I’m fine.
PAUL
Listen, your father and I are sending you twenty dollars for food for the month.
PUAL’S MOTHER
Use it on food.
PUAL
I will dad.
PUAL’S MOTHER
Your mother and I are just so worried.
PUAL’S MOTHER
Pual are you ok. Do you need anything.
PUAL
No mom. Don’t worry. Everything’s great.
PUAL’S MOTHER
I love you.
PUAL
I got a call mom I got to go. I will call you back later.
Pual grabs his jacket.
ADAR O.S.
Hey, Hero! I got your ride outside. Your princess awaits. Ready to pick her up?
EXT. PUAL’S APARTMENT- NIGHT
Adar fixes his hair in the mirror.
ADAR
King Dick! Hel Yeah brother. Did you get some rest after last night?
PAUL
A little.
ADAR
I couldn't even sleep. I just kept watching that beheading. That shit was so sick. The cops have to be like who the fuck did this. Ha!
INT. DALLAS POLICE STATION- NIGHT
POLICE CHIEF
Guys what we are looking for is clear. These guys.
Presses play.
POLICE OFFICER
Chief I can’t really make out his face.
POLICE OFFICER
He wearing a hat.
POLICE OFFICER 2
It’s a fedora. But make no mistake. This guys is the same guy in the conveyance store shooting. I have studied the footage. This is some king of Vigilante. The guy was obviously the girls pimp. He took her up there to turn a trick and Muhammad one of the top ten on our terorist watch list just happened to be up there. This is a consciences but, make no mistake we are dealing with the same guy from the store shooting.
POLICE CHEIF
What’s your name officer?
BRYAN
Bryan sir.
POLICE CHIEF
Congratulations you have been promoted to Detective.
Bryan (thirty years old) - Looks at television grinning.
POLICE CHIEF
Grab your shit and move it into an office. After that get lunch then get to work on this case.
Pats on his shoulder.
FELLOW OFFICER
How’s that promotion feel?
BRYAN
Feels good. Alright boys be on the look out for a tall white muscular male around the college campuses. That’s just me going on a hunch here.
EXT. PUAL’S APARTMENT- NIGHT
Limo honks it’s horn.
ADAR
Pual!
PUAL
Hey what’s up?
ADAR
Did you check your bank account Mr.?
PAUL
No why?
ADAR
Well, I hope you don’t mind but, I swiped your card last night. It was so that I could do this.
Pulls out a credit card.
ADAR
I had to to get your account number.
PUAL
You could have asked.
ADAR
I wanted it to be a surprise. It’s not like I don’t respect you. In case you didn't hear me, I put one hundred grand in your account. Now we are connected. I said bro get used to be friends.
Tosses keys.
ADAR
That long black limo is yours. As for the girl. You will be picking her up at the North Timbers Palace.
PUAL
Lovely gated community.
ADAR
You’ve been there?
PUAL
Yeah I know a couple of friends that live there.
Starts to rain.
ADAR
Awesome you know the way. When you get to the gate is pound two eight five. The monitors are charging in the back seat. You know how to drive a limo right?
EXT. LIMO- NIGHT
Limo pulls up.
ADAR O.S.
Her name is Sara and when you see her she’ll be the love of your life.
Gates open. Limo pulls up to a woman
PUAL
Nice to meet you.
Sara (twenty five years old) - tall blonde hair wearing a red dress.
SARA
Hello.
PAUL
You look good.
SARA
Thank you.
PAUL
Adar said you would know what Hotel.
SARA
It’s the Hyatt. Room forty four.
SARA
You look like you lost train of thought.
PUAL
That was my number in football.
SARA
I don’t want you having the wrong idea about me. I want to go to school. That’s why I’m doing this. It is so I can afford college. Treat me with love dignity and respect and I’ll do the same.
PUAL
I will take care of you don’t worry about that.
SARA
Hey did your old man ever come into your bedroom and give you the talk. Well, mine did. I was twelve when he came into my room and tucked me into bed. He used to finger bang me so hard I’d get hiccups.
PUAL
That’s very disturbing.
SARA
I’m not going to have sex with you. So don’t go home and masturbate to me. Forget all that baby monitor shit. I carry a nine millimeter. I’m not your normal escort. I’m a cash whore. As long as these johns are willing to pay a thousand dollars an hour I’m going to keep them cumming
PUAL
I guess I’ve been upgraded.
SARA
No. Your still the same. I’m not your provider. I tip you if I feel like. Adar and his fater has your salary.
Limo stops.
PUAL
Do you want to feel safe with me.
SARA
I’m starting to but, it’s more important for me to feel safe alone. That’s why I own a gun. You cannot tell me you don’t appreciate an independent woman that carries herself with poise, dignity and a firearm.
PUAL
Your entitled to that money. Don’t forget my ass is on the line too.
SARA
Oh yeah what are you going to do?
PAUL
Kick down the door and fucking come after you.
SARA
Thanks but, spare me the drama. Most guys just want to get there rocks off. Do you see these shoes.
PAUL
They look nice.
SARA
They are Italian. Cost over five thousand dollars. I could pay for those in one night. My clientel is stocked. They own companies or serve in congress. They don’t expect some cheap ugly whore. I don’t expect a worthless smo whos going to offer me sixty dollars to suck his dick. You are a limo driver not my pimp.
PUAL
Did I mention you look nice.
SARA
You couldn't afford it.
PUAL
I don’t want to pay for it. I want to keep this professional because you know that Adar’s told me to take care of you tonight and you bet your ass he’s paying me right. I’m doing this for the money wired to my account the other day. I could give a flying rat’s ass if you tip me or not. I’m doing this for me honey so don’t lay down your power trip and think that your alone. We are both in this for the cash plain and simple..
SARA
Don’t get your dick hard on me I’m just letting know you can justify this whore.
Touchers her hair.
PUAL
Honey I mean this in no disrespect but your a loose... cannon and that’s the bottom line.
SARA
You’d still fuck me.
PUAL
Maybe after a bottle of wine.
Limo pulls up to Hotel in downtown.
PUAL
We are here.
SARA
Listen, I’m sorry about beign a bitch it’s just that sometimes I feel like I’m living a double life. I feel that one day I’m going to go up into that hotel room and It’s going to be someone I know. I know your here to help me and I respect that but, It just takes me off my heels a bit not to be driven by Adar.
PUAL
I guess you could say Adar has taken me under his wing.
SARA
That’s an expensive wing. Adar is rich but his father is his only family. That woman he calls mom is just one of his whores. The guy has a bordello in Prague as well as ties with the mob. I don’t know why he is even going to school, It’s obvious he is taking daddy’s business.
PUAL
He doesn't have to go without a meal. I need this help plus it doesn't hurt that I have to look at you.
SARA
I didn't know your going to school.
PAUL
I had a full scholarship but, I fucking blew it. When I got kicked off the team. They had already told my folks. That I’m on steroids. I can’t talk to my parents. It’s hard to even pick up the phone. They want to help me but, they can’t and they know it. I’m depressed most of the time except when I’m on a dozen pills. If you think I’m proud for doing what I’m doing. Well it’s no more than you.
SARA
I’m not going to judge you.
SARA
It’s not that easy to trust someone you don’t know. I’m having to do this to get what I got When I graduate school I will stop.
PUAL
I’ll hold you to that.
SARA
Maybe he thought we should meet.
PUAL
I’m Glad we did. Please for me put this in your purse.
He hands her the baby monitor.
PUAL
It’s on take it.
Grabs it.
SARA
We’ll do it this time, just in case.
She glares at him intensely.
PUAL
Thank you.
INT. HOTEL LOBBY NIGHT
The two walk straight past the front desk her arm in his.
INT. ELEVATOR- NIGHT
PUAL
You smell terrific.
SARA
Save the pick up lines.
PUAL
I meant it.
SARA
You can wait in the hall or go back to the limo I really don’t give a fuck.
PAUL
I’ll be around the corner.
Sara knocks on the door.
SARA
Hello. Are you in there?
Pulls out her phone and starts dialing.
SARA
Somebody call this ass hole. No one’s coming to the door.
She looks at Pual.
SARA
They are calling him. Yo is this guy here? Well get a hold of him.
Phone against her ear.
SARA
Hello.
She knocks.
PUAL
Let’s wait in the limo.
INT. LIMO- NIGHT
Pual Turns the key. An ambulance passes outside.
PUAL
Must be a wreck.
SARA
My mom used to say a prayer every time she saw an ambulance.
PAUL
Are there some chilled bottle in that fridge.
SARA
He usually just takes me in his car.
She walks to the fridge and pulls out a bottle.
SARA
Don P. Well this is very expensive wait.
She tosses him the bottle.
SARA
Well, don’t you know how to pop the top?
Grinning Pual puts his thumb on the cork.
SARA
Do it.
POP! The cork flies out the moon roof
PUAL
Grab the glasses.
The bottle explode bright bubble rapidly spill on the floor.
SARA
A toast to a night of making no money.
Her phone rings.
SARA
Hello. We are going to a bar. See ya! Adar said the John never called back. Must have been a ghost call. We get those alot.
PUAL
What did you just say?
SARA
We are going to a bar?
PAUL
Ghost call.
SARA
Yeah.
PAUL
It gave me dejavu.
SARA
Well, that’s not always a bad thing. You look like your worried.
PUAL
I’m not worried.
SARA
I don’t know. It’s early so we might as well have fun on a loss.
Turns up the radio.
SARA
Like to dance.
Dances in his lap.
SARA
Alright tiger. Maybe you have never been tamed by the stronger sex.
PUAL
You do this naturally.
SARA
I’m not a stripper but I do know how to seduce.
Dance two him with the champagne glasses
PUAL
You maybe free.
He refills her glass twice.
PUAL
Maybe you should slow down.
SARA
Never tell a grown woman how to drink.
PUAL
I just don’t want to take care of you when you get too drunk.
SARA
That’s sweet but, I don’t need a daddy.
He grabs her and pulls her down on his lap.
PUAL
I think you do.
They kiss with intensity. She bites his lip.
PUAL
Ow.
He takes off her top then rips her panties off.
SARA
Oh God yes!
INT. BAR- NIGHT
Pual and Sara play at a pool table under dim lights.
SARA
I want to kick your ass into the wind.
PUAL
Devil on my shoulder and angel to my face, think you can pick a side?
SARA
I’m the Christmas present so kiss my ass.
Their sexual acts get more intense.
PUAL
You so fresh!
SARA
Yeah wake up and not love me when I making a date give me money for cum.
PUAL
Do you got to church?
SARA
Yeah right.
PAUL
Don’t get offended I just wanted you to tell the truth.
SARA
Why do want me to turn into some kind of christian girl all of the sudden and marry you.
PUAL
Nevermind.
SARA
Listen if yu want to keep driving me you need to get your jack ass Tony Snow attitude back.
SARA
You got land and you got money but, not rock upon to build your fortress.
PUAL
Can you tell that I’ve been looking.
Kisses.
SARA
Hold me.
PUAL
Baby please.
Hard sex.
SARA
You didn't last long.
PUAL
I usually try to train my Thing baby.
SARA
I take it as a complement.
PUAL
You could go and get a million guys but, no one can lick your pussy like me.
SARA
I think this is the wettest I’ve ever been.
PAUL
I love honestly.
Touches her between the legs.
SARA
Can I trust you?
PAUL
You got, me of course you can.
INT. PUAL’S APARTMENT- MORNING
Pual walks in Stefani is asleep in his bed.
PAUL
We need to talk.
STEFANI
About?
PAUL
I need my space.
STEFANI
You wanna do what? I should have known you come home every night smelling like perfume and what kind of security guard dresses that nice at work. I never cheated on you. You know you are a real piece of work. You try so hard to come off as such a good guy but, your just trash. You don’t deserve me.
PAUL
I know.
Stefani cries and runs out.
INT. BURGER HOUSE- NIGHT
Stefani walks by tables in red shorts and men flirt.
STEFANI
Alright, here yo guys.
CUSTOMER
Thanks sweet cheeks.
Slaps her ass.
INT. LIMO- NIGHT
Pual looks in his mirror. Sara smiles.
SARA
Ready to make some money tonight.
PUAL
Yes.
She takes her gloves off.
SARA
We are going to the Fairmont.
INT. BURGER HOUSE- NIGHT
A line cook screams at Stefani.
LINE COOK
Your table’s food is getting cold.
STEFANI
Ok! Thanks, I got it.
CUSTOMER
Hey Babe can we get some more bread?
STEFANI
Sure. I’m coming.
INT. FAIRMONT- NIGHT
Pual waits outside the door. Looks at his new watch.
SARA
Alright lets go.
Walks out the room adjusting her dress.
INT. LIMO- NIGHT
The two kiss.
SARA
Another good night. I waited tables for a year before I met a girl in the restaurant I worked at. She cam in with a man that looked like her father. I thought it was until. He got and went to the restroom. That’s when she told me that she was getting paid to be his date for the evening. They tipped me three hundred that night and I went to the classiefied the next day found Adar’s number and since then I have’nt had to worry about money.
PUAL
With what Adar’s paying me now. I can’t see us doing this for more than another year. After that we should curl up for a month in a little hut on the beach.
SARA
What about when your done with school? Where do you see yourself in three years?
PUAL
I don’t want to be a doctor or a buisness hot shot. Honestly I’d love to just learn to surf. I’ve always thought if I ever got up on that board I’d never want to come down.
INT. BURGER HOUSE- NIGHT
Stefani spills drinks all over her customer then runs out the restaurant.
MANAGER
Stefani what the heel happened. Put that cigerette out and go apologize to your customers.
She continues to cries.
STEFANI
Fuck you I’m out.
Gets in her car and drives away.
INT. BABY DOLLS- NIGHT
Stefani walks into to Don’s office.
DON
I know you would come back and beg to take your clothes off for me.
STEFANI
Please I need the money.
DON
Take your clothes off. Now! Strip!
Takes off her clothes.
DON
Now go rub your twat on that poll.
DJ
Welcome back to the stage Stefani. Get your asses up and tip a slut.
Men walk up to her with bills in their mouth.
INT. LIMO- NIGHT
Sara’s phone rings.
SARA
Hello. Ok. Sure we can do that to.
PUAL
What’s the score?
SARA
Two more and we are through for the nite.
PAUL
Well, lets make some money.
Crawls to the front of the Limo. Cranks it.
PAUL
We are off. Where’s the first one.
SARA
Marriot then some town home outside of town.
PUAL
You mean it’s not a hotel.
SARA
It’s like a condo.
PAUL
Have you been there before?
SARA
Yeah it’s chill. Easy two grand.
PAUL
Let’s finish by three. Don’t give those guys more than fifteen minutes.
He looks back at her.
INT. BABY DOLLS- NIGHT
Stefani is on the pole as chance and two girls walk in.
CHANCE
Yeah ladies lets take a quick brake before heading to the next spot ok. Grab us a table.
SEFANI
Hey Paul.
CHANCE
Hey what are you doing here.
STEFANI
I really need the money.
CHANCE
Well, here.
He hands her a hundred.
CHANCE
Your not with Paul anymore.
CHANCE
I heard yall fight last night. I’m his roommate.
STEFANI
I didn't know I was that loud.
CHANCE
I guess I’ll grab a Dance.
STEFANI
Sure.
CHANCE
Meet me and my girls in the V.I.P.
She follows the group up to the VIP section.
STEFANI
Can I ask you something?
She is dancing on Chances lap as the other girls watch.
STEFANI
What’s Paul’s new job?
CHANCE
What if I told you I made that in one night or I mean we made it.
STEFANI
Stop fucking around I know he’s not a security guard.
CHANCE
That’s what he told you. Ha!
He pulls out a large amount of cash.
CHANCE
I told Paul I wouldn't say anything.
She grabs his gentiles under his pants.
CHANCE
We work for the same man.
STEFANI
Your a pimp.
CHANCE
No, I’m just the driver.
Stefani makes Chance have an orgasm with her hand.
CHANCE
Damn baby your going to make me change my pants.
STEFANI
I want a job.
Chance watches his two escorts take over the stage.
DJ
Alright we got some fresh bacon on stage tonight. Get crazy!
CHANCE
I’ll talk to my boss.
STEFANI
Do it now.
CHANCE
I’ll tell you what. There is a girl I’m supposed to take to a private party tomorrow. You show up in her place then you can have her takes.
STEFANI
What time.
CHANCE
Around eight.
She pecks his cheek.
CHANCE
I’m glad you and Paul broke up. I always thought you where too fine for him.
She starts to walk out.
CHANCE
Hey, where are you going.
STEFANI
I got to get rest for tomorrow night.
He watches his two escorts make out naked.
INT. LIMO- NIGHT
Paul pulls up to Sara’s place.
SARA
Stay with me. We made alot tonight. Let’s just celebrate.
She hands him a bottle of champagne.
PAUL
Sure I’ll stay.
They kiss.
EXT. LIMO PLACE- DAY
PAUL
He I’m turning in the keys for Adar.
Hands man keys.
PUAL
You guys have my ride in your garage.
CLERK
What’s your name?
PAUL
Paul Townsen.
EXT. PUAL’S APARTMENT- DAY
Paul Pulls up and Stefani watches him get out.
STEFANI
I’m calling you out mother fucker.
PAUL
You don’t know what your talking about.
STEFANI
Oh fucking save it. I found out what your job is. Yes! Exactly you can’t say nothing.
PAUL
Just come in lets talk
STEFANI
I don’t want to talk to you. I changed myself for you. I’m not going back.
Gets in her car.
PAUL
Come on Stefani chill out!
INT. PUAL’S APARTMENT- DAY
Paul lays don on his bed. Looks to his side then grabs the phone.
PAUL
Come on pick up.
Slams the phone down. BAM! BAM! BAM! on his window.
PAUL
Hello.
ADAR (O.S.)
Come open your door.
Paul opens his Front door
ADAR
Hey how are you doing. Sara said you guys are hitting it off. She fine as shit man didn't I tell you. That’s why she’s so expensive. Get some sleep I wanted to let you know she already has three returning customers begging for tonight. Say that money wired to your account. I’m going to put the rest of it in there tomorrow.
PAUL
Sure.
ADAR
How’s that limo? Sweet ride huh? It’s gassed up so, your good for tonight.
Adar looks around Paul’s room.
ADAR
Ok, get your beauty sleep I need you good and rested for tonight.
Adar walks out and Paul walks back to his bed.
EXT. PAULS’S ROOM- NIGHT
Pual Puts on his three piece suit. RING!
PAUL
Hello?
MURPHY (O.S.)
Just making sure we are still on for Bow hunting in the morning.
PAUL
Yeah, I’m just going to Paul an all nighter. You got a bow for me?
MURPHY (O.S.)
You bet I do buddy. Get ready to kill your first buck. I got the perfect spot. When you let the shot go you got believe in your arrow and see it hit the mark.
PAUL
I’ll call you when I drop Sara off.
MURPHY (O.S.)
Who’s Sara?
PAUL
A new girl I’ve been driving.
MURPHY (O.S.)
You better make sure she’s eighteen. Hell, Adar had me driving a girl that was sixteen. Anyway that creeps me out man. I got another bouncer job at the cub across town. I’ll talk to the manager there and see if I can get you in
PAUL
Thanks but, I’m making too much money to quit. I’ll call you around three or four and well meet up get something to eat.
MURPHY
Alright brother.
Hangs up phone grabs keys.
INT. LIMO PLACE- NIGHT
Paul grabs the Limo keys from the clerk.
PAUL
Thanks.
CLERK
Sure.
Clerk looks at him with evil glare as the door closes.
INT. LIMO- NIGHT
Paul answers his phone.
PAUL
Hey what’s up.
ADAR O.S.
Paul it’s Adar slight change of plan. We need you to pick up another girl. She’s already at a bar down town. You got it?
PAUL
Sure what’s the address.
EXT. LIMO- NIGHT
Limo Pulls up to a bar.
STEFANI
Well, I guess we get to work to together after all.
She opens the passenger side door and jumps in.
INT. LIMO- NIGHT
STEFANI
Wow, you look nice.
PAUL
What are you doing here.
STEFANI
I’m your date for this evening.
PAUL
Forget about it hop out. I’m not driving you so don’t even ask me.
STEFANI
So you can make money but, I can’t is that it.
PAUL
No! Your too good for this.
STEFANI
Oh spare me the shit we are taking the loop and heading to some condominiums outside of town.
Pauls phone rings.
PAUL
I think I have the wrong girl.
ADAR O.S.
Stefani Is she wearing the long black dress.
PAUL
Yeah I know who she is I’m just saying I’m not taking her. I know her.
ADAR O.S.
The Client tonight cannot be let down. It is somewhat of a celebrity. She will make good money I can assure you that.
PAUL
It’s just I don’t want her doing this.
ADAR O.S.
Now Paul, the client mus’nt be kept waiting. I’ve deposited five grand to your account and when are done with the job tonight you will get even more. I thought we had a deal?
PAUL
Yeah sure.
ADAR O.S.
Good. Do this if you want it to be a long and prosperous and beneficial relationship. Believe me Paul my father will take good care of you. Your bills your school. All of it.
PAUL
I’ll do it tonight but after that I’m not driving this girl anywhere ever again.
Hangs up phone
STEFANI
Alright, lets go.
PAUL
Put on your seat belt.
STEFANI
I didn't really work out. I’m sure you know how hard it is to find legitimate work. After all your a fucking pimp.
PAUL
Do you want to do this.
STEFANI
Yes. I need the money. I guess you have forgotten but I have a kid Paul and we need to eat.
PAUL
Girls that do this are’nt hungry for food.
STEFANI
This is my night Paul I just want to have fun. Here do a bump. Relax. I’ll suck your cock later if you want.
PAUL
Don’t be fake.
Pulls out a bag of coke.
PAUL
No, I don’t want to.
STEFANI
Well then shut the fuck up do your job and take me to the condos.
PAUL
I just didn't want you to get caught up in this lifestyle I always thought you were better than it.
STEFANI
Oh, Paul I’m sorry I’ve been mad at you. I’m so sorry. I’m not trying to spy on you, it’s just that I put two and two together after talking to one of your friends about getting in the same line of work.
PAUL
Who.
STEFANI
I can’t tell you.
PAUL
Why? That’s bull shit now fucking tell me.
STEFANI
It was chance.
PAUL
That mother fucker.
Pulls the limo to the side of the road.
STEFANI
I did it to be closer to you. If you promise to quit I will too. We don’t have to live this way. There is a better life out there. If it mean dropping out of school to work an honest job than that’s what you’ll have to do but. Let me help you. I know your parents are mad at you over losing the full ride but they can get over it because its your life and they don’t have a clue what it takes to be you.
PAUL
I don’t want you in there for longer than twenty minutes. Do what you got to do to take his money and get out of that place. We will do this last job together. I’ve got some money saved. Fuck college lets just go on a vacation somewhere. Find a beach.
STEFANI
Paul, thank you.
Limo pulls back on the road.
PAUL
Don’t mention it.
PAUL
Where is your purse.
STEFANI
I did’nt bring it.
PAUL
Your kidding me. You always carry your purse.
STEFANI
Adar told me not to bring it.
PAUL
You talked to Adar?
STEFANI
Yes.
PAUL
We can’t use the baby monitors if you don’t have your purse.
STEFANI
Just smile it’s going to be alright. It’s probably some business executive that wants to spend half his salary on me tonight.
Lightning flashes on the horizon.
EXY. HOTEL PARKING- NIGHT
A valet approaches the limo.
VALLEY
Sorry sir, hotel policy says I have to park your ride.
PAUL
Ok, gives us a second.
INT. LIMO- NIGHT
He grabs the baby monitor and the speaker.
PAUL
You ready?
Slips it in his coat.
STEFANI
I guess.
PAUL
Let’s go.
Paul exits the limo then takes Stefani by the arm.
PAUL
Just smile and act like we have a room here.
She smiles.
STEFANI
We do.
EXT. HOTEL- NIGHT
Heading up the steps to the hotel door.
INT. LIMO- NIGHT
Valet presses a button on his walky-talky.
VALET
They are on there way.
INT. HOTEL HALLWAY- NIGHT
Approaching the elevator.
PAUL
Take my coat.
DING!
PAUL
What floor?
Steps in the elevator.
STEFANI
Top floor.
Door closes.
INT. ELEVATOR- NIGHT
Paul reaches into the jacket and pulls out the monitor.
PAUL
I want you o keep the jacket on.
STEFANI
Don’t worry about me.
PAUL
I want you to keep the mic. I got to hear whats going on.
STEFANI
You’ve done this before.
PAUL
Yeah and it’s not always pretty.
STEFANI
Ok, I’ll keep it on me.
PAUL
If he tells you to take off your dress don’t thow it on the coat. Keep it by your side.
STEFANI
Don’t worry.
PAUL
Listen to me.
STEFANI
Ok. Lets just make this cash and go to your place. Then we will forget about this.
Thunder. It starts to rain. DING! Elevator opens.
INT. TOP FLOOR- NIGHT
Walking down a long off white hallway.
STEFANI
Well, It’s easy to tell which one is the pent house sweet.
One room in the entire floor.
PAUL
I’ll be at the end of the hallway close to the stairs. Make it quick. Only take your time if he is really passive and paying you already.
STEFANI
It don’t cost less than ten g’s.
PAUL
Go knock on the door.
They part.
INT. STAIRWELL- NIGHT
Paul steps into the stairs and listens to the baby monitor.
STEFANI (O.S.)
Hi. Can I come in.
Door shuts.
PAUL
Come on Stefani.
Paul looks at his watch then starts to pace.
PAUL
Come on say something let me hear you.
INT. PENTHOUSE SWEET- NIGHT
TALL MAN
Come in have a seat.
Reaches for her coat.
STEFANI
That’s ok I got it.
Takes off her coat. Her mouth is covered with white gauze.
TALL MAN
Sshhh. Just go to sleep.
BALD MAN
Take her coat.
TALL MAN
I got it.
They move back a set a blinders to reveal two hospital beds.
SURGEON
Get her prepped with an IV ready to induce meds.
Tall man lugs her body to the hospital bed.
SURGEON
The king is ready for anesthesia.
Pulls back a curtain then leans down to speak to an elderly man in another hospital bed.
SURGEON
She’s here we can begin.
Elderly man nods. Surgeon slips a breathing mask over the man’s airways.
BALD MAN
Looky here.
Pulls out the baby monitor from the coat pocket.
TALL MAN
Lets just turn this way down.
INT. STAIRWELL- NIGHT
Eroc looks at his watch and throws the monitor down.
PAUL
Murphy hey brother, I need you help. I’m at the Penthouse sweet. Yeah Marriot downtown. I need you to come. Look I’m on a job with Stefani. She walked in and I heard a bunch of different voices. She’s been in there for an hour. She’d never stay that long. Look I’m going to knock on the door. If you don’t hear from me in ten minutes bring your guns.
INT. PENT HOUSE FLOOR- NIGHT
Paul walks toward the door.
PAUL
Stefani you alright in there.
Christmas songs faintly play in the room.
KNOCK! KNOCK!
PAUL
Hello.
Door pops open and slowly cracks.
PAUL
Hey, Stefani.
Pushes the door open and walks in.
TALL MAN
Hello.
PAUL
Where is she?
TALL MAN
Behind there.
Points to the blinds.
PAUL
Stefani!
Surgeon walks out form around the blinds.
SURGEON
She can’t hear you, She is under anesthesia.
PAUL
What the fuck is going on in here.
Turns around and the Bald man is pointing a gun at him.
SURGEON
What’s going on is, Stefani is about to save a King. He needed her heart. We have been waiting for you Paul. Your going to do the same.
Walks to the door.
BALD MAN
Don’t move.
SURGEON
You’ll be fine. If you act calm about this I’ll reward you. I’ll put you so deep asleep you will think it was all just a dream.
PAUL
Fuck You!
SURGEON
Take out his knees.
Bald man shoot Paul in both his knees.
PAUL
Oh shit!
SURGEON
That’s right.
Tall man kicks his face knocking him to the floor.
SURGEON
Sorry big man but, we need your organs not your face.
Doctor plunges a needle in his ass.
PAUL
Please no.
SURGEON
Don’t worry Paul. This was’nt your faul. You were picked. Your just part of a plan. It may be hard to convince some people but, they are just not as important as some other.
The tall man brings the surgeon his medical table with a plate of tools.
SURGEON
I don’t want to turtore you but im having to much fun. No one is going to save you just realize your life is done. Deleted. You know what we are going to do to you.
Paul looks over to the table Stefani is on.
SURGEON
Well I’ll go ahead and tell you now that you can’t move. We are going to take you and your girl friend there and put you on display. After we take your organs there will be nothing left but, muscles and skin and bones. Well, that’s getting sold to some China man that will turn you into a plastic body display behind a glass case. Little kids will walk by you and Stefani’s remains and point then say oooo, or that’s gross. I had to just so you know the story tell you that they are just going to have to burry empty caskets for you and Stefani becuase there just aint gonna by a body. From now on you and her belong to me.
Paul rolls off the bed.
SURGEON
For god’s sake subdue him to the bed. I have to take care of her right now.
The tall man pulls Paul back on the hospital bed.
BALD MAN
Hold his arms.
Bald man ties him to the bed.
SURGEON
Relax your dreams will turn into nightmares..
He pulls out a syringe.
INT. MURPHY’S CAR- NIGHT
Murphy lights up a cigarette and turns up the radio.
RADIO DJ
Look out guy we got a storm and it’s just started to hit. Expect rain and wind to increase to the point of possibility, I’m just saying there is a possibility here we might see a little Hell and that’s for downtown including northern parts of the county.
Rain falls louder. Murphy turns up the speed on his wipers.
PAUL
Alright Paul. Hopefully all three of yal are in that room asleep.
INT. PENTHOUSE SWEET- NIGHT
Surgeon hold up his phone.
SURGEON
That’s right everything is going exactly according to plan. Have them ready for me. I’ll be done in around three or four hours then we will be on our way with fresh meat.
Hangs up phone.
SURGEON
Make sure he is tied down we can’t afford to slow down.
Bath room door opens and steam pours out of the room. Adar walks out wearing a robe.
ADAR
Greatest shower of my life.
Adar dies his hair.
ADAR
You know your not supposed to wash your hair with shampoo everyday.
Looks at the bald man.
ADAR
It will make your hair fall out.
Walks to the hospital bed with the old man on it.
ADAR
How’s my father?
SURGEON
He is doing fine. He already accepted her liver. Of course we still have to get what’s left out of her.
She lays on the bed chest spread open and missing half her internal organs.
ADAR
Yeah let’s get our money out of her.
ADAR
What about Paul?
SURGEON
He is getting ready for the full harvest. Those organs will be worth ten times their weight in gold on the Isreali black market.
The valet walks out of the bathroom naked.
ADAR
OooH! Stop beign so bad infront of my dad.
VALET
He’s knocked out. He can’t see
anything.
Surgeon inserts IV in Pauls arm.
ADAR
Well your distracting to me and I want to make sure our doctor friend can finish his work.
Adar slaps the valets ass then.
ADAR
On second thought keep the clothes off. I’ll just have to keep an eye on you and our doctor.
Adar walks over to Paul.
ADAR
When I looked at you I know we be benificail to each other. You just had no clue you where worth hundreds of thousands to me and well to tell you the truth I was going to have the arabic do you but, he was to sloppy and you were suprising strong. That’s when I knew to get your organs I had to out smart you. Originally your liver was going to go in my father but, Stefani just fell in my lap by chance.
Surgeon cuts Paul open down the middle.
PAUL
Help.
ADAR
I thought you sedated him.
Blood runs down the middle of the bed into a bucket.
SURGEON
He is.
Paul flexes his arms and moves his head sluggishly.
SURGEON
We are out of Anesthesia. He will just have to bleed out. I’ve already shot him up with the rest of the paralyzing agent. I don’t have anymore.
ADAR
Well, put tape over his mouth.
KNOCK! KNOCK! KNOCK!
MURPHY (O.S.)
House keeping
Surgeon looks at bald man.
BALD MAN
Who the fuck is that?
SURGEON
Did you put the do not disturb sign on the door.
BALD MAN
I told you to put the sign on the door.
ADAR
Forget about it guys I’ll answer it.
INT. PENTHOUSE FLOOR- NIGHT
Murphy stands outside the sweet’s door hold a 45 colt semi automatic.
MURPHY
You-hoo.
Whistles.
ADAR
Coming.
Door opens. Murphy puts the gun to Adar’s face.
MURPHY
Where is he?
ADAR
Murphy he buddy. Your just in time we are just having ordherbs.
MURPHY
Bullshit, it smells like blood in here.
The bald man walks out form behind the blinds.
MURPHY
Who are you? What’s behind those blinds.
ADAR
Paul and Stefani.
MURPHY
Let me see.
Adar nods his head to the bald man and Murphy walks towards the blinds.
MURPHY
Holy shit.
Adar grabs Murphy’s arm.
SURGEON
Shoot him.
Tall man and Bald man both pull out their guns.
MURPHY
Sick fuck’s
The tall man shoots and Murphy jerks Adar infront of the tall ma’s gun.
ADAR
OW! Fuck!
Adar is shot in the back. Murphy returns fire and dodges bullets before falling behind the couch. He puts his gun over the couch and shoots the Bald guy without looking. The surgeon walks behind the couch and shoots Murphy’s cist off the side of his face then another bullet zips into his shoulder. Murphy returns fire hitting the Surgeon in the head.
MURPHY
I know there is more of you.
The tall man grabs Murphy putting him into a bear hug.
MURPHY
Big foot.
Shoots the tall man’s foot.
TALL MAN
Ow.
Bleeding he stands up from behind the couch.
VALET
Suck my dick mother fucker.
Valet starts spraying automatic weapon killing the tall man. Murphy ducks holds his gun up and hits the valet in the neck.
MURPHY
I don’t know what the fuck this is but, I’m not going to jail.
TALL MAN
Wait. Help me.
Tall man is bleeding but, alive on the floor.
MURPHY
The devil couldn't help you in hell.
Murphy looks at Paul.
MURPHY
I told you I’d help and I did what I can.
Murphy picks up his hunting cap then puts on Pauls coat. He staggers out the door.
INT. MURPHY’S CAR- NIGHT
Murphy turns on the car then grabs his shoulder in pain.
MURPHY
Come on crank.
The car cranks. RING!
MURPHY
Fuck!
Startled he picks up the phone and steps on the gas pedal.
MURPHY
What’s that man? Nope didn't hit a thing. I’m going to have to make today another day in the woods with my arrows.
Murphy focuses on the dwindling veiw of the city. Blood runs off his face.
Ok. Well talk to you later then. Bye.
Turns off the phone pulls out a bottle.
MURPHY
Good ol’ moonshine don’t let me down.
Chugging the bottle he throws some on his face and shoulder.
MURPHY
God damn your lucky to be alive.
He pulls off the main road and on to a dirt one.
EXT. MURPHY’S CAR- NIGHT
The car pulls off the road and into the woods. Murphy pulls out a fishing tackle box from his trunk. Pulls out a needle and thread. He stitches his face up then uses needle nose pliers to pull the slug out of shoulder. He takes another sip from the bottle and passes out in the back of his truck.
Text: Two years later
Murphy’s wounds have healed and he is cooking meat on a bbq pit in his backyard.
MURPHY
And add som special seasonings.
A telescopic lens spies on Murphy. He flips he meat and walks inside.
INT. MURPHY’S CABIN- DAY
He notices in a reflection something pass by his window. He grabs the bow and arrow off the wall. Pulls arrow back and walks into the living room. A man swings his arm at Murphy to shoot his gun. Murphy lets the arrow go and it zips through the man’s wrist and into the heart of another man behind him.
MURPHY
Have a seat! I was going to offer you guys some meat.
Stretches the bow back with another arrow then points at the man who was holding the gun.
MURPHY
Where’s your friends.
The man reaches in his coat. An arrow goes through his wrist and into his stomach.
MURPHY
Lets go.
Murphy grabs the guys gun then the arrow and walks him hout the door.
ELDERLY MAN
Ronnie is that you.
Murphy puts the gun to his head.
MURPHY
Tell him to come in.
WOUNDED MAN
Yes come in.
MURPHY
Turn your head around and say, we killed him.
He turns his head.
WOUNDED MAN
We killed him.
Murphey walks the man back into the cabin pulls out the arrow and shoves it in the guys throat.
ELDERLY MAN
What the fuck.
Murphy shoots three guards protecting an elderly man.
MURPHY
Sit down old man.
ELDERLY MAN
Don’t shoot!
MURPHY
I will if you don’t shut up.
ELDERLY MAN
You should have killed me in that hotel room. Instead you killed my son. It took me this long to track you down. Hell the cops don’t even know who you are but, I had a photographic memory of your face.
MURPHY
You took that poor girls liver.
ELDERLY MAN
If a millionaire needs another life to extend his that is just understood that the stronger will survive. You think your getting out of here alive. I got six more men in those woods.
MURPHY
Well, thanks for the tip.
Shoots the man in the gut then grabs his bow and arrows. Murphy puts black paint on his face and walks out the door.
POLICE OFFICER
Freeze Police.
THE END
Written by VelvetJ AKA JVelavet AKA Trailer Park of Tears AKA PISH AKA JAcob JOnes
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